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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2012 22:12:19 GMT -5
Okay so I was sad one day. So I was like, "I'm gonna write a poem." even though I never write. So I did. I felt so happy after I wrote this.
The Black Rose
Dead leaves and stems litter the ground the scars and burns of depression and neglect still remain far after the residents have withered away Only one remains though his heart has browned He holds his head high like a proud peacock flaunting his brilliant commandind feathers which have faded to gray
Seemingly oblivious and headstrong Yet there's a sight that has remained unturned and unseen A significant part of his story torn from the seams of his book the most important proportion like the refrain of a song concealing the pain and loss like a child hides a broken vase no one knows and they never even tried to look
Slowly slowly losing his color and dims more each day How long until he closes his petals and dissolves into the sun? Every second searching for hope and a reason to stay alive But only losing ground, digging the grave, watching life fly away Near the end saying goodbye a moment too early Realizing a moment too late he wasn't the only one deprived. [/i]
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Post by Virus on Dec 10, 2012 16:47:39 GMT -5
Amazing poem, it leaves a really big impact.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 10, 2012 18:14:19 GMT -5
Thank you so much <3 I was trying to make it have an impact or at least catch peoples' feelings. I didn't think it worked, but I guess it did :3
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Post by †RileyWolf†™ on Dec 10, 2012 18:15:22 GMT -5
Zomg.. I love it!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 10, 2012 18:18:31 GMT -5
Thank you~ I think that the only time I write poems is when I'm sad ._. [/color]
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Post by Silverdragon943 on Dec 10, 2012 19:51:42 GMT -5
Really nice Poem <33
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Post by Deleted on Dec 10, 2012 20:12:37 GMT -5
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Post by Biohazard on Dec 10, 2012 20:26:30 GMT -5
Gorgeous poem!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 10, 2012 21:09:31 GMT -5
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